tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post6251744512597559962..comments2023-10-25T03:56:46.179-05:00Comments on Chicks In Lit.: Short Story Chapter 5S.B.Niccumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15937300870516627878noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-73915576471709299052012-08-06T16:05:25.430-05:002012-08-06T16:05:25.430-05:00Your the best, Nikki! I just hope that everything ...Your the best, Nikki! I just hope that everything in my head comes through to the reader. And if not I'm here to answer any questions. Boy sometimes I wish I could talk to the writer about some books I've read.D.S Melanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04400371845340784106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-19840362190388827852012-08-06T15:03:42.205-05:002012-08-06T15:03:42.205-05:00I know what you mean. In the novel I'm working...I know what you mean. In the novel I'm working on, people would wonder why I did something a certain way, but there's a purpose to it that can only be revealed later. I understand. I'm sure you have a unique concept in your head, and we're enjoying watching you reveal it to us bit by bit. So, go at your own speed and do it your way, and we'll enjoy it as it comes. :-}Nikki Barnabee/@GargoylePhanhttp://nikbarnabee.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-80099507233551719052012-07-31T19:01:03.581-05:002012-07-31T19:01:03.581-05:00THANKS LADIES!! Your thoughts mean the world to me...THANKS LADIES!! Your thoughts mean the world to me. <br />Nikki, I totally agree with you about Stacy. Ben's narrow existance limits the naritive. and though it is sad that you get to know so little of her there is a purpose behind it.D.S Melanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04400371845340784106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-66896929503468025292012-07-31T10:32:00.569-05:002012-07-31T10:32:00.569-05:00I love your choice of words in so many parts of th...I love your choice of words in so many parts of this story. For example, "Ben's foot falls betrayed him", "the heavy culmination of all his efforts", "the crunching sound of skull against asphalt". Very descriptive and to the point, but not in a common way. I am very excited to read how this story ends.<br /><br />Just awesome!!!!Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-44971078807002925202012-07-31T09:57:51.309-05:002012-07-31T09:57:51.309-05:00Dang! I want to hear what happens next, and I want...Dang! I want to hear what happens next, and I want to hear it now! LOL The story is getting more intense, dark, exciting. Ben-the-cyberstalker is heroic, yet I try & keep in mind that he has a creepy side.<br /><br />One thing I would consider -- giving us something from Stacey's point of view. What's she like? Does she suspect anything is going on, such as feeling like she's being watched, etc? She is one unlucky chick, having 2 strange guys obsessed with her. Yikes! ;-}Nikki Barnabee/@GargoylePhanhttp://nikbarnabee.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.com