tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post5906401163688063254..comments2023-10-25T03:56:46.179-05:00Comments on Chicks In Lit.: Drum roll please. S.B.Niccumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15937300870516627878noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-24247384817679513982012-09-04T14:40:43.320-05:002012-09-04T14:40:43.320-05:00I love how you two have had different reactions. c... I love how you two have had different reactions. close friends of mine that have read it too have reacted one of these two ways; either finding sympathy for Ben and seeing it as a tragedy or a story of a sad man getting his justice. <br />You're both correct in you assessments and I'm glad that it came through in the story. <br />Thank you very much for sticking with me. Your comments have meant the world to me because you're both such great writers. D.S Melanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04400371845340784106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-54478452026942268902012-09-03T15:14:52.775-05:002012-09-03T15:14:52.775-05:00Cyn beat me to it! "OMG" is the first an...Cyn beat me to it! "OMG" is the first and best thought that comes to mind! I never would have guessed the direction the story took. And that's the best kind. What an awesomely unique ending you chose. Congrats for coming up with it! You did great, both in writing it and piecing it out over 5 parts, building the suspense. Congrats again. :-}<br />I do have a different view from Cyn, though. I see it as kind of a cautionary tale -- don't stalk people. Stalking was the catalyst that set it all in motion. Let's hope he learned his lesson. But I doubt it . ;-DNikki Barnabee/@GargoylePhanhttp://nikbarnabee.weebly.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1071743330827999947.post-47374930911353912082012-09-03T12:13:22.158-05:002012-09-03T12:13:22.158-05:00OMG! What a twist of fate...........I feel so sorr...OMG! What a twist of fate...........I feel so sorry for all of them, but especially Ben, because he thought he was doing something good. He was trying to protect Stacy and now his dream of her loving him and being with her forever is sooooo over. <br />What a great story, Deb! Will there be another to look forward to? :-)Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.com